There aren't many story games that make me feel for the characters, but this one did. I got genuinely heated when the plain knight took down Leyla and Pops then acted as if nothing happened!? I wanted to hurt her so bad and that's how I'd want to feel when I play games like this!
All in all, this game has so much potential and I look forward to more updates!
Thank you so much for the nice comment! It's honestly nice to see that people feel that way for the characters, as you can't quite guess it right if people will care about them while writing, so I'm glad you loved them lol
This has been a fun ride! I'm enjoying this world you are building and I swear I can feel the heat of this desert already! But maybe that's cos I live in a tropical country--ANYWAYS! Amazing start with an equally amazing premise. I've always adored knight themed stories and you keeping our knight tall to give that impressive intimidation pleases my brain plenty!
Also, I wish to add, Layla's armor is so edgy, I am bleeding all over from being cut haha! I adore her so much! I honestly like all of them. Such a cute and exhausted family that needs a hug!
Also, yer fucking analogy with writing this chapter was hilarious OMG! This was a great start! I am so strapped in to see where this adventure will go! Already giving me a pain in my heart after that event--ugh ; w ; Poor babies!
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There aren't many story games that make me feel for the characters, but this one did. I got genuinely heated when the plain knight took down Leyla and Pops then acted as if nothing happened!? I wanted to hurt her so bad and that's how I'd want to feel when I play games like this!
All in all, this game has so much potential and I look forward to more updates!
Thank you so much for the nice comment! It's honestly nice to see that people feel that way for the characters, as you can't quite guess it right if people will care about them while writing, so I'm glad you loved them lol
This has been a fun ride! I'm enjoying this world you are building and I swear I can feel the heat of this desert already! But maybe that's cos I live in a tropical country--ANYWAYS! Amazing start with an equally amazing premise. I've always adored knight themed stories and you keeping our knight tall to give that impressive intimidation pleases my brain plenty!
Also, I wish to add, Layla's armor is so edgy, I am bleeding all over from being cut haha! I adore her so much! I honestly like all of them. Such a cute and exhausted family that needs a hug!
Also, yer fucking analogy with writing this chapter was hilarious OMG! This was a great start! I am so strapped in to see where this adventure will go! Already giving me a pain in my heart after that event--ugh ; w ; Poor babies!
I can't wait to read more!
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!